Discover
the 4 Hard and Fast Rules for Writing
High-Impact Copy That Generates BIG Sales, Subscriptions,
and Click-Throughs... In SMALL Spaces
We all know that
well-written copy is one of the most highly effective methods of
getting people's attention and attracting them to your product or
service
but the importance of the shortest copy is often overlooked.
A lot of people don't even realize that things like their navigation
menus, links, or even their newsletter subscription offers ARE copy
and require careful consideration.
Ironically,
this kind of copy is one of the most valuable tools you have.
Think about your
- Banners
- Classified
ads
- Newsletter
subscription offers
- Navigation
menus
- Links ("click
here," "buy now")
This sort
of copy is typically asking people to take some sort of action
that is vital to your business: visit your web site, request
more info, subscribe to your newsletter, click through,
buy the product
which is why it requires so much
more attention than it tends to receive.
Of course
it's more difficult to get your message across when you have limited
space, but short copy is the glue that holds your marketing
campaign together. And if every button on your menu, every
ad, every link isn't as absolutely compelling and effective as
it can be, you're not going to get the results you're hoping for,
be it more sales, more subscriptions, more referrals, etc...
So I'm going
to show you four Hard and Fast Rules of copywriting that
must be followed in even the shortest of copy to guarantee you
always make the most profitable use of the little space you have.
| Hard
and Fast Rule #1: |
You
MUST emphasize benefits, not
features |
I know, I
know, you've heard this one before. But I so often see copy --
short and long -- that neglects to mention how the features
of a product or service will benefit customers that I'm guessing
a good number of you aren't sure what this really means. So let
me clarify for you
- A FEATURE
is one of the components or functions of your product or service.
For example, if your toothbrushes come packaged with glow-in-the-dark
toothpaste, that's a feature -- not a benefit.
- A BENEFIT
is something your product or service will do for your buyer
to somehow offer a solution to a problem. So if your toothbrushes
that come with glow-in-the-dark toothpaste make stubborn kids
thrilled to brush their teeth before they go to bed, then
you've got yourself a benefit!
Are you following
me? An online real estate agent advertising "real-time
mortgage calculations" is advertising a feature of her
site; however, if she writes, "Avoid wasting time haggling
at the bank with my real-time mortgage calculator," then
she's advertising a benefit.
Emphasizing
benefits is the number-one most overlooked rule of copywriting,
and this lack of emphasis is one of the top reasons advertising
falls flat. Short copy is no exception -- and you don't need a
lot of room to do it right.
Let's take
a look at a short classified ad. If you posted an ad that read:
Real
estate on the Internet.
Plenty of listings.
Shop at your convenience.
you
probably wouldn't get the greatest response. The ad is brief and
to the point, but it lacks clarity. First of all, what kind of
property is being advertised? Are the listings for commercial
buildings or family homes? What part of the world does the ad
refer to? How many listings is "plenty"? How do we get
to see these listings? And,
most important, how does this service benefit me?
There is a
vague reference to the benefit of "convenience" in this
ad -- but it's not really explained. Let's dress it up a bit:
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Take
a Personal Tour of 375+ of Seattle's Hottest,
Most Affordable Single-Family Homes
Skip the hassles of house hunting when you search our HUGE
online database of single-family homes:
- 375+
homes with pictures, video tours, and detailed descriptions!
- Search
by price, location, number of bedrooms, number of bathrooms,
and more!
- Get
FREE local school reports, neighborhood information, and
mortgage calculations!
Click
here now
to begin searching our online database of Seattle's hottest,
most affordable family homes -- without leaving your
computer!
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This
version expands on the benefit of convenience and details the
different ways this convenience offers solutions to the house-hunter's
problems. So the benefits we're clarifying for the reader
are:
- House
hunting is a hassle and now you can avoid it.
- Physically
going to see 375 homes would be practically impossible but you
can easily do it online.
- You
can search the database by very specific criteria to effortlessly
find exactly what you want.
- Plus
you'll get free reports that detail all the information you'll
want to know about a new home and neighborhood that you wouldn't
get even if you went there in person.
Also
note that this ad targets a specific niche: single-family home
buyers in the Seattle area. Targeting your
advertising is the only way to get your benefits in front of your
best potential customers, as we'll discover in the next section...
| Hard
and Fast Rule #2: |
You
MUST write to a targeted audience |
The fact is,
your product or service is just not going to appeal to everyone.
And if you try to market it to everyone, you'll wind up with far
fewer sales than if you choose a select group to direct your copy
to. So once you've defined your target market, you need to turn
your attention toward making sure your copy addresses them directly.
For
example, let's look at pay-per-click advertising. Let's say you
bid 17 cents per click in Overture.com for the key phrase "single-family
homes." Because you pay every time someone clicks through
this link, whether they purchase from you or not, you want to
make sure that your ad carefully targets your best potential
customers.
Given
that you're targeting single-family home buyers in the Seattle
area, you'd want to make sure your ad includes this vital piece
of information. That way, you can be sure you won't waste money
on people searching for single-family homes in San Diego!
And
if you bid 41 cents per click for the key phrase "Seattle
homes," you'd want to make sure to write an ad that clearly
states that your site features single-family homes... so you don't
waste your advertising dollars on condo-seekers or recreational
property buyers.
By
writing a separate ad for each of your keywords that carefully
targets your market, you'll ensure that you attract the most
buyers for the least cost.
Of
course, if you're writing copy for banner ads, your approach will
need to be a bit different. Whether you're:
-
Purchasing blocks of impressions (i.e. you pay a set dollar
amount for your banner to be displayed 1,000... 10,000... etc...
times on other web sites), OR
-
Participating in a banner exchange (i.e. you're trading banner
impressions with a network of other site owners)
...
you've paid for your advertising up front, so you'll want to do
everything you can to attract viewers' attention and persuade
them to click through to your site. And this means you'll want
your ad copy to be a bit more general, to ensure it attracts
the highest number of click-throughs.
The
title of the above classified ad would make a great banner:
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Take
a Personal Tour of 375+ of Seattle's Hottest, Most Affordable
Single-Family Homes! Click here
now...
|
...You're
targeting your best potential customers! But you might also try
testing banners with more general copy that read something like
this:
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Search
HUGE online database of 375+ Seattle Dream Homes and skip
the house-hunting headaches!
Click here now...
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The first
ad is going to attract the most qualified audience -- those people
who are looking for a single-family home in Seattle for a reasonable
price. The second version, however, will attract a slightly
broader audience. Still in Seattle and still looking for homes,
this group is not necessarily looking for a single-family dwelling,
and they're not necessarily worried about price. They're just
checking out homes in the Seattle area and they're attracted by
the size and convenience of the online database.
While the
first ad may generate a higher visitor-to-sale conversion rate
(the percentage of people clicking through who then sign up for
the service) because it is more specific, the second ad will probably
solicit more click-throughs in total, because it has a more general
appeal. You'd have to test to see which version would pull the
most sign-ups altogether.
| Hard
and Fast Rule #3: |
You
MUST include a call
to action |
Okay, easy
enough. BUY NOW! There's a call to action.
But hold on
a minute. If it were that simple, everyone marketing online would
be rich, and every online shopper would have to move into a bigger
home to accommodate all that happily purchased stuff.
There are
two very important things that you must include in your call to
action:
- You must
determine exactly what action you want people to take,
and
- You must
provide a reason why people should take that action.
Isn't buy
now exactly the action you want? Not necessarily. Think about
what exactly it is that you are trying to do. Are you trying to
generate leads? Do you want people to sign up for your free newsletter?
Are you trying to attract a specific audience and hoping to convert
as many of those people as possible into sales?
It is important
to understand that ALL copy, if possible, should contain a call
to action that clearly identifies what action is desired. I can't
emphasize this enough.
Think about
the buttons on your site menu. Each one is a call to action! And
they are all very important! If they're not as direct as possible,
telling visitors specifically what to do, they will be
useless.
For example,
if you have a button that is labeled "sales," you are
doing nothing but confusing your visitors, leaving them guessing
whether you are referring to product sales (i.e., online
ordering), products that are on sale (i.e., specials or
discounts), or maybe the opportunity to sell your product
(i.e., merchandising opportunities). But your visitors won't guess
for long -- why would they bother? They'll just leave your site.
If you change
the button copy from "sales" to "order online,"
you are now asking viewers to take an action -- to order your
product. This clarifies the purpose of the button and tells the
viewer what to do to get your product. Another example: instead
of writing "E-mail," you could ask your viewers to "Contact
Us" -- again, you're asking your visitors to take a specific
action!
Of course,
you will not always be able to include a call to action in every
button; you won't always have the space.
Your best bet in this case is to be
as clear as possible.
For
example, it would be difficult to include a call to action in
a button of your navigation menu that leads to your newsletter
back issues. There would not be room to say "click here now
to read our newsletter back issues." So in this case, you'd
just want to make sure that your copy is clear. Label the button
"Newsletter Back Issues" instead of "More"
or "Old Stuff."
Now let's
think about your links. Supposing "buy now" is
the action you want
You have to give people a reason
why they should buy. Huge, garishly colored words on a screen
won't do the trick; added benefits will.
And in your
links, you have a little more room to move. The call to action
should remain the central focus of the link, but pack in as many
benefits as possible around it. Something like...
| "Click
here now to claim your 'Golfer's Guide to
the Green' and instantly receive the downloadable video
that features up-close-and-personal interviews with Pro Golfers
who reveal their hottest golfing secrets, guaranteed to improve
your game in 2 weeks or your money back!" |
...will win
out every time over "Buy now."
| Hard
and Fast Rule #4: |
You
MUST pay attention to
layout |
Making the
most of your layout is especially important when you're writing
short copy. The right blend of emphasis and information is the
best way to attract viewers. Don't underestimate the effectiveness
of bolding, italics, underlining, color, and white space.
But don't
overdo it either!
For example,
an offer to subscribe to your newsletter must be brief, compelling,
and effective. It will not be the main feature of your web
page or anyone else's, so it must be attractive enough to grab
the attention of a distracted reader. But it also needs to remain
readable and informative, without a gross misuse of formatting
tricks.
If your ad
has too much going on in it, it will look unattractive, unappealing,
and unprofessional -- and the clutter will detract from the meaning
of your message.
On the other
hand, too little emphasis leaves you in danger of never catching
anyone's eye. If your ad is totally boring, no one will ever even
see it -- and if they somehow do, they probably won't look at
it long enough to find out what it's about.
So let's try
to find a happy medium, emphasizing without crowding
.
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Catchy,
effective, and professional in appearance, this version draws
your attention and doesn't distract you from the information it
contains once you're there.
The
ad is clearly laid out and easy to read. The title is underlined
and in blue, as is the link. This is the standard way to handle
links, and it lets the viewers know they can link to the sign-up
page from either place. Giving readers two chances to link
through to your sign-up will always work better than one.
(And never have any blue, underlined text that is not a
link!)
I've
used only subtle formatting tricks to provide emphasis while keeping
the ad visually appealing. The title of the newsletter is in quotation
marks to give it additional emphasis. The main features of the
newsletter -- what you'll learn from the experts -- are emphasized
by the use of bullet points and a nice amount of white space.
And the main benefits of the newsletter -- reduce your expenses
and dramatically increase your annual income -- are italicized
and strategically placed right before the call to action.
Because
the call to action comes at the end of the ad, it is supported
by all that came before it. And because it is the last bit of
text and it is in blue, the viewer's eye is effectively drawn
through the ad after being attracted by the title.
Of course,
some of the formatting techniques discussed here are available
only to people formatting their ads in HTML. Obviously, you have
more options in HTML and can do pretty much whatever you like.
But in text format, you don't have the choice of adding color,
bold, italics, etc. You DO, however, have the ability to use characters,
spacing, capitalization, and indentation for effect.
So if we had
to format our ad in text, it might look like this:
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"FREE Subscription to 'Potato Farmer's' Newsletter"
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today and on the first Tuesday of each month
you'll receive tips and strategies from INDUSTRY LEADERS
who'll reveal...
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for cutting down the time you spend in the field!
- Cost-effective
strategies for TRIPLING YOUR CROP YIELD!
- Plus much,
much more!
Each issue
contains tons of easy-to-implement techniques, guaranteed to
REDUCE YOUR EXPENSES while dramatically
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Because
we don't have the option of hyperlinking the text, effectively
highlighting it in blue, I've moved the capitalized "FREE"
to the beginning of the title to attract attention. I've also
enclosed the headline in quotation marks for emphasis, and put
the newsletter title in single quotes (which should always be
used inside double quotes).
I've
capitalized the benefits that were italicized in the HTML version
along with a few more benefits to make the ad as eye-catching
as possible. The general rule in text is to capitalize whatever
you would have bolded or italicized in HTML, but be careful with
your use of caps -- they're difficult to read if used excessively.
Final
Thoughts:
So now that
you know the secrets of fitting high-impact copy into small spaces,
I'll let you in on another little secret
there's a lot more
to learn!
In fact, this
article itself has been an exercise in fitting tons of information
into a relatively small space! Writing sales
copy, designing banner ads, writing powerful classified ads, putting
together an effective newsletter subscription offer... these are
all topics that I've devoted entire lessons (i.e. hundreds
of pages) to in my Insider
Secrets course.
However, now
that you have some of the basics under your belt, you should be
able to start making dramatic improvements to your short
copy... improvements that will attract a much bigger response
and increased sales! If all your copy is written with the rules
of benefits, audience, calls to action, and layout in mind, you
simply can't lose.
And remember:
no amount of copy is so small that it can be overlooked
every link, button, banner, and classified ad is either making
or breaking your marketing campaign as we speak!
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